Friday, October 2, 2015

Caged Bird Poem ( revision #1)

I know…
I know why the caged bird sings…
I know...
The bird needs space…
He needs freedom…
He needs life, love and happiness…
The bird needs a life…
He sings because it needs battles…
He needs victories…
The caged bird needs to glide, sore, and fly...
This bird needs an actual life and not a cage...

1 comment:

  1. Good morning, Jacob,
    This was great, and I loved your use of ellipsis's to continue your thought all the way to the end, letting the reader finish for you. It was very cleverly done.
    Have a lovely night,
    Zachary

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