great! Hey Jacob! I loved this simple six word memoir-it had so many meanings. I love going home after a long day or practice and meeting my mom at the door. My home and my mom are both so comforting to me and they are the first things I think about when I am stressed or need to calm down. I also like how we associate homes and mothers almost simultaneously with love and warmth. I think you did a great job portraying all these emotions in only six words. Great job!
Hey Jacob
ReplyDeleteI like how simplistic your memoir was. I liked also that you could tell it had a lot of thought behind it.
Riley
great!
ReplyDeleteHey Jacob! I loved this simple six word memoir-it had so many meanings. I love going home after a long day or practice and meeting my mom at the door. My home and my mom are both so comforting to me and they are the first things I think about when I am stressed or need to calm down. I also like how we associate homes and mothers almost simultaneously with love and warmth. I think you did a great job portraying all these emotions in only six words. Great job!