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From the window I watched it cross, from that point I had
no control. My body froze and I couldn’t move. The tall black figure moved in
the dark, all I saw was a 6’5” shadow moving to the side of the house. I watched
it through the curtains as it moved out of my vision to the side of the house. I couldn’t see it anymore and it was dead silent. There was no sound other than
the pounding of my heart, about to beat out of my chest. I quickly moved the curtains
to cover the window and shuffled to the wall next to window. I was unaware of
what would happen next.
I slowly moved from the wall and stepped with ease across
my bed room to the door. I looked to my left and saw my Louisville slugger
baseball bat. I grabbed the bat and proceeded to open the door. I stepped out
of my room into the darkness. The house was a quiet tomb, as if nothing was
even happening. I couldn’t hear a thing. No footsteps, no noise at all. I
looked to my right into the darkness and saw nothing, so started walking. I had
a feeling of someone watching me, and I was extremely scared of what the figure
might have been. I moved forward though and found a place by a window at the
front of the house by the front door. I stopped and camped there waiting to see
the shadow move past it or see it in the distance in front of the house.
The quiet was unsettling, I heard nothing, until I heard
a tapping at the front door. I walked over to the front door with the bat up,
ready to swing. I grabbed the handle and swung open the door. There was nothing
there… just the street lit up by the street lights. I turned around thinking it
wasn’t anything. As soon as I turned around I saw the tall black figure
standing in the walk way in front of the door inside my house! It was just
standing there and seemed to be staring at me. I chucked the bat at its head
and took off out the door! I turned on the jets as I ran out of my house,
through the yard and on to the sidewalk. I was running for my life. I didn’t look
back, I just ran. My feet were rough against the sidewalk, as I made my escape.

I like the line about the quiet being "unsettling." I know just what you mean. I also like the line about turning on "the jets." : )
ReplyDeleteThis story gave me chills! I loved the haunting tone that this story had and the way you used descriptive words. I also liked how darkness was mentioned frequently throughout the story to illustrate just how creepy things were. I like cliff-hangers a lot and really want to see a sequel to this story! Hopefully the main character got away and found a new place with more light. Great job!
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